Beta Request Redux

Still seeking Beta readers (one found; would like more); I've altered the nature of the request.

Ugh.

I cannot stand people who routinely post rude comments but get all pissy if you question them on it. If you're going to be all smug and condescending to people, have the courage to explain your hypocrisy, at least.

Not everyone who calls you on your shit is trying to start a flame war, you self-important ass.

Anyway. Whatever.